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Jupiters_Magic
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PostSubject: Take a look please? I want to make it better! :D    Sun Aug 05, 2012 11:16 pm

So if you guys didn't know, I am a fanfiction authoress, and currently I'm writing a YGO story where my character uses a spellcaster deck. Now, I have made one a few months ago, and I'm not sure what to think about it anymore. So Xyz was nice enough to attempt a spellcaster deck for me (I owe him!) and I've constructed it (I've tweaked it to fit 40 cards). My character has the Dark Magician as her "Duel Spirit" (although I'm going to change that) as well as Magicat.

So I'm asking is if you guys can tell me what I need to do to improve my deck. here's the link to the image and below are the card names (since you cant really read the card names lol) http://i.imgur.com/c2CWm.jpg

And here are the cards

Monsters:

2x Dark Magician
1x Black Luster Soldier
2x Breaker the Magical Warrior
2x Buster Blader
1x Dark Sage
3x Effect Veiler
1x Gorz the Emissary of Darkness
2x King of the Swamp
1x Magicat
2x Magician's Valkyria
1x Sangan
2x Skilled Dark Magician
2x Tour Guide

Spells and Traps
1x Book of Moon
2x Bound Wand
1x Dark Hole
1x HEavy Storm
1x Monster Reborn
2x Mystical Space Typhoon
2x Polymerization
2x Pot of Duality
1x Book of Secret Arts
1x One-Shot Wand
2x Secret Villiage of the Spellcasters
1x Magicians Circle
1x Royal Decree

Extra Deck (15)
2x dark paladin
2x Number 17
2x zenmaines
1x acid golem
1x leviair the sea dragon
1x utopia
1x maestroke
1x black corn
1x steelswarm roach
1x hierophant of prophecy
1x photon Papill
1x catastor

Side Deck ( 9 so far)

2x Magicat
1x Book of Secret Arts
1x Diffusion Wave-Motion
2x Magidog
1x One-Shot Wand
1x Royal Decree
1x Magicians Circle

Please leave me your advice! pale pale pale Please?!

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PostSubject: Re: Take a look please? I want to make it better! :D    Mon Aug 06, 2012 1:15 am

Well I dont know about the deck, but I cant wait to hear your story!
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PostSubject: Re: Take a look please? I want to make it better! :D    Mon Aug 06, 2012 12:15 pm

Thanks Captain! If you click the fanfiction link in my signature, it will take you to my profile and the story is titledd, "No Ordinary Life"

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PostSubject: Re: Take a look please? I want to make it better! :D    Fri Aug 17, 2012 3:20 pm

I think it's a really cool deck
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PostSubject: Re: Take a look please? I want to make it better! :D    Thu Aug 30, 2012 6:35 pm

Take out 1 effect vieler, for a D.A.D, In your side deck add lightning vortex if your opponent is a sort of otk type, and shadow imprisoning mirror, for dark worlds often used alot, and light imprisoning mirror which bassicly wrecks the whole system of lightsworns and fables + it doesnt ruin your own play like shadow since your running a dark spellcaster deck. As this is for a book it seems like a great deck so i wouldn't change a thing Very Happy *expect what i pointed out ofc.

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